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You sat on a bench in the park reading, not really paying much attention to your surroundings. The sun began to set and a cold breeze blew, causing you to shiver. A man with flaming red hair plopped down next to you and offered you his scarf. His hair was spiked back and his poison green eyes hid whatever reason he was offering the piece of cloth. He had the strangest markings on his face. Upside down purple tear drops. One under each eye.

"I don't need it. I don't get cold easy." He stated as you started to shake your head. He sighed and put it on you anyway. It smelled of him. A burnt cherry wood smell. Very sweet and enticing. "Name's Axel, got it memorized? I know your name. See you here everyday."

"Guess that means you're here everyday too."

"Its a good place to relax. And to see a beautiful sight." He smirked. You blushed and thanked the author for letting it be hidden behind the scarf. He started to leave as it was getting dark and the street lamps were coming on. You went to pull the scarf off to give it back. "Keep it. If you really want to give it back. Come back here tomorrow just after the sun sets." He walked off, disappearing into the darkness.

The next night, you walked through the park, searching for that mess of red spikes. This night was cold like the last. You decided to rest under a street lamp. The wind blew again, and you tightened his scarf around your face. You deeply inhaled his scent and was so distracted by it, you didn't notice the hand about to grasp your shoulder. You screamed once it had a firm grip on you. You were pulled further and further into darkness. Suddenly, you presented with a small field surrounded by trees. In the middle was a small blanket with a candle and plates set on it. You turned around quickly to see a smirking redhead. He grabbed your hand gently and led you to the blanket. He sat you in one spot and he sat in one across from you. He pulled a basket out of seemingly nowhere and began pulling out different food stuffs. It all smelled yummy.

"You cook?" You ask so suddenly, it surprises you a little.

"Nah. But I got a friend who is a chef. I asked him to cook me up a little something. You wouldn't believe what I had to do and still have to do to pay him back." You thought of the possibilities but shook them out of your head. You two ate dinner with minimal conversation. It almost got to the point of awkward. After the meal, you remembered why you came. You pulled off his scarf and attempted to give it back. He stared at it for a minute and then just looked away. You cocked your head to one side, confused. "So, that's why you came back? Just to give me that scarf?" He sounded so disappointed. It was partly true. You did come to give back his scarf but you also can back to see him again. He sighed and shook his head. "Keep it. I don't want it. It would just remind me of a ba-" He stopped talking as you leaned over and kissed him on the cheek. He turned almost as red as his hair. He quickly reverted back to normal and smirked. "Very forward... I like it." Axel leaned forward and pressed his lips against yours. His tongue slipped passed your lips with ease and played with yours. He smelled of burnt cherry wood, like the scarf, and tasted of cherries. It was a few moments before you pulled apart. You stared deeply into his eyes. They were like green pools of poison. So alluring yet toxic. "So, how bout me and you get into a serious relationship?"

"Are you asking me out?"

"Do you always answer a question with a question?"

"Do you?" He laughed. "Yeah, I'll be yours." He looked up at the stars. You felt Axel pull you close. It seemed liked he had a heat that radiated off him. Especially on a cold night. "Want your scarf back?"

"Sure. Why not?" You started to hand it to him and then got up and ran with it and he chased you. Hey, if he was going to be YOUR boyfriend, he was going to work for you.
I had a HELL of a time finishing it. So if the ending sucked, I'm sorry. Originally.... Axel not having a heart was going to be in there. I didn't know where to fit it. Surry again! I tried my damnest! And I wrote it as if the 'you' in the story could be male or female. I'm proud of that! Sorry to the guys reading this. Forgive me tor making you ukeish! Oh, and if you never have smelled cherry wood burning.... it smells really good.

Axel Disney Interactive and Square Enix

Xemnas-
Xigbar-[link]
Xaldin-
Vexen-
Lexaeus-
Zexion-[link]
Saix-[link]
Axel-You Are Here
Demyx-[link]
Luxord-
Marluxia-
Larxene-
Roxas-

Riku-[link]
Squall/Leon-
Ron Weasley-[link]
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KatMagnet Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2014  New member Student Writer
I remember the reason I came and take the scarf off and offer it to him. "So that's the reason you came." Sounds disappointed and doesn't take it. I hold both ends of scarf,put it behind his head and pull him close to kiss him on the lips. What he doesn't notice is me putting the scarf on him. I pull away smirking, and he realizes he's wearing it.
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DAMMIT WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THIS
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KatMagnet Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  New member Student Writer
XD I dunno. I just start wondering what I would do in these situations and imagine myself as a really flirty character (even though in real life I'm one of those people who would die of a heart attack if a cute redheaded guy asked me on a date, and would easily blush or get embarrassed). Other times I imagine myself as a really shy person or a really mean person, depending on which character it is that I'm interacting with in my mind. If I were a character in fruits basket, I think I'd be kind of like Uotani. (At least, I'd like to be like her) lol I'm jus one of those ADHD or ADD people or whatever and my mind is constantly shifting from one thing to another, and I'll play little fantasies in my mind with different characters. XD
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's why I write these. So people can have another cute fantasy. ouo
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DannielovesSoulEvans Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
No probs! I making one. I'll tell you when it done!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
cool ^^ hope it comes out awesome c:
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DannielovesSoulEvans Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Thanks!
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DannielovesSoulEvans Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Yeah! You're a great writer! Hope you get through everything!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^u^
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DannielovesSoulEvans Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
I loved this! Make Moar! ^_^
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I am in the process of finishing the requests. Including a sequel to this one.
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heheh
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't you just think he's smoldering hot? //shotsohard
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yes...no..FUCK YES
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AxelScarletVIII Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.O
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...I... I don't know how to take that.
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AxelScarletVIII Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol im kidding, I love it! :iconleasqueeplz: Axel approves! :thumbsup:
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. ^^
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Xendrak18 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful!:heart:Can you please do a sequel to this?!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I sure can!
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Xendrak18 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much!!!:hug:
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No thank you! I didn't think this one was that good but readers like you proved me wrong. ^^
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Xendrak18 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks.I just love anything that has to do with Axel:heart:you did a great job with story and I can't wait to read the new one that you do,so please let me know when you finish please:D
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Will do!
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Xendrak18 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!:hug:
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Rasberrykitten44 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
AXEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
._.
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Yahsa Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OAO <3 <3 <3 FUCKING LOVE IT!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Yahsa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure! It was awesome and I freaking loved it!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
8D I actually wasn't so sure about this one :T
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moushi-senpai Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012
:squee:
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyoshisohappyplz:
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EdwardCullensluver Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
GAWD YES! <3 fav for sure!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yay :3
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hahahafuckyouall Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
HAHA!! This is soooo awesome!!!
Well written!
And plus, you get to imagine that you're with Axel xD
:glomp:
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for faving it and if you would like to request a lovers story, just speak up.
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hahahafuckyouall Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
You should do Roxas!!
That would be awesome, OH AND RIKU!!!!!!!!!!!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i was planning on a roxas but ill put riku on the list as well
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hahahafuckyouall Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
YAY!
My new obsession is with Riku ^^
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
just let me brush up on him and i'll have it in no time.
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hahahafuckyouall Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
^^
I find Riku hard as well. He such a depressed character!
xP
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
ah gawd i know OH INSPIRATION HIT WHILE WRITING THIS REPLY! woot!
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owlhuggermaddie Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
Lol this is cute!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^ i thought the ending was a little rushed though
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iamthemarvelqueen Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahahaha!! this was super funny!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: !!!! love it!!!
i :heart: axel!!
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks glad you liked it
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iamthemarvelqueen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome! awesome job!! ^.^
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MaikaFranklinCLW3 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Student General Artist
Aww ^_^ I like it >.< Imma gonna wait for the Roxas one, I need it.
I'm Axel, she's Roxas, it's cute, i'm linking it to her
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calming-thoughts Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awww. Thanks. Um Got any ideas for my roxas one?
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